Sky Shadow

black, orange and white butterfly in foreground against blue sky

Shadow in the sky,

Your luminous spots declare

A creature of light.


Now that I have had another look at it, what do you think of this single word change?


Shadow in the sky,

Your luminous spots betray

A creature of light.

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